Well the grammar is not correct in all places, there is no set subject, save the paragraph itself. one sentence ends in a question mark but is a statement.

is that what you are going for?
 

PyRo wrote:

This old one runs forever, but never moves at all. He has not lungs nor throat, but still a mighty roaring call. What is it?
 

A Waterfall

Pyro wrote:

My host thinks I'm an irritation, a bother, a pain. But he can't evict me, so here I will remain. Then one day I'm taken and ranked among my peers. Can you guess just what I am? Then you might call me dear.
 

A Pearl




My Grandfather used to tell me that one years ago. He used to use it as a metaphor for people in general - they may portray a cold, hard exterior to the outside world, but once you get underneath that and really get inside them, they often hold a beautiful soul. It's because of the delicate nature of their soul that they hide it away, feeling a sort of resentment for it as they often can't express themselves truly. A 'Catch 22' if you will.

*ahem* Anyway - Murder. Death. Kill. Let's frag, baby! 

This is an unusual paragraph 

It took awhile for me to realize that the paragraph was missing the letter "e" in it. It never appears once, I thought this was weird considering it's extremely common. So that's what I think is wrong with the paragraph.