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peashooter

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This is my first amv ( Anime Music Video). Even if you dont like anime please take a look, I`ve worked on this for a week. My first one so i want any suggestion remarks or anything u can think of mean or nice. Im ready for the brutality.

http://planetsidemovies.com/modules.php?name=Downloads&d_op=NewDownloadsDate&selectdate=1111475155

Thank you

If this link dont work type in peashooter under search.

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I don't know anything about anime, but it wasn't bad. You have a good theme going there and your transitions looked good from scene to scene. Only thing I really noticed is that the music is too loud. You get a feedback sound probably from setting the volume up too high in the program you were using. Other then that, I'm good with it.

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Thank you on review.

Just to let everyone know the link now works and my movie is the one posted by PeaShooter.

I appreciate any1 who takes the time to watch.

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Pretty good senor.

I have seen some of this series, but not much. You did a good job with editing and transitions, as cham stated.

his only complaint is also mine. the music is distorted. Clean up the Audio and you have a grade A AMV.


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I thought that the music put some emotion into the video, and the video put some story into the music. Like I told you before that is a great combination. The only problems were technical, your source recording was distorted, prolly recorded at to high volume, and some of the subtitles go by way to fast to leave them in. But the minor technical stuff aside I thought it was excellent.

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I concur, good vid man. I also think the audio could be tweaked alittle. (was a little rough. Mahapse a re-rip of the song with a higher bit rate? would make the audio file bigger, but have better clearity.) But all in all, twasn't bad at all, the roughness of the audio actually gave a, shall we say, ooomph to the video, a grittyness that helped convey feeling. Well done.

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i agree with eme!! Good job! i liked alot! Kudos to you!

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Wow Pea. You have inspired me to post a link. Well here they are, the first two films from broken warrior films.

Starring yours truly. :-p

http://www.brokenwarriorfilms.com/Broken-Warrior-Films.htm[url]

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Glad i inspired you to post.

Love your video, I like the first one better then the second one. Swords should win over guns, lol.

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lol but he werks at AOL so the sec. one is hilarious!!!

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I got a 404 error Taco. You really do work at AOL...

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i got that too, you just need to erase the [url] thing on it! then it will werk!

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cplmac wrote:
I got a 404 error Taco. You really do work at AOL... 

LoL, Cplmac your so cruel.

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That was good Taco. Which one is you? I like the end of that second one.

I thought this was a good video. This isn't me nor did I have anything to do with video, I just thought they did a pretty good job with it. I think this lightsabor duel is better then the movies.

https://home.comcast.net/~jubatus7/ryan_vs_dorkman_320.mov

p.s. sorry, but the video will only be up for a day or two.

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cham that was awesome!
cool and funny great work whoever did it.

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