need a judging on this one

OK, for those who've been playing lately and have been on while I've been there, you'll know I've been using screenshots to form a sort of comic for a site I've been building for the last few months. (A sprite and hand drawn comic site.) Since it's already on the site, I was just wondering if I should change things in it. I'll post the address once it's updated this coming February. Criticism is welcomed.